This was an optimistic speech by David Cameron concluding the Conservative party conference in Manchester yesterday. One might take exception that the speech took more account of optimistic rhetoric than optimistic plans or optimistic policies…but that’s a comment for others to make.
His speech titled, “Leadership for a Better Britain“, was notable for its upbeat tone. Yes, it acknowledged the economic challenges ahead but it called for dynamic action…not that the actions were spelled out.
Using some very simple language and his trademark short sentences his speech explored the economic uncertainties, the achievements to date and future unknowns.
He told some good stories, in a style that had us thinking back to another Party’s Leader only a few years ago:
A few months ago I was in Nigeria, on a trade mission. While I was there, I visited a vaccination clinic. It was very hot, pretty basic and the lights kept going off.
Speaking slowly and deliberately, he used an analogy to help explain his economic plans:
I know you can’t see it or feel it yet. But think of it like this. The new economy we’re building: it’s like building a house. The most important part is the part you can’t see – the foundations that make it stable. Slowly, but surely, we’re laying the foundations for a better future.
That worked. But somehow we had the feeling that there wasn’t too much detail to the plan anyway.
His speech included numerous lists…the bullet points of the political speaker. Here we were treated to one that made good use of repetition as well:
So let it be this party that helps tear it down.
Rigour back in learning.
Standards back in schools.
Teachers back in control.
Yes – the Conservatives are back in government.
His attentive Manchester conference audience also heard a good example of the position taker with:
Some say that to succeed in this world, we need to become more like India, or China, or Brazil. I say: we need to become more like us.
Not bad. In a speech that was positively littered with metaphors (“but they’re stuck in the mud of our planning system”), we also heard some fine clichès and youth speak. Definitely the stuff of the modern party conference speech. How about:
Remember: it’s not the size of the dog in the fight–it’s the size of the fight in the dog.
You know what the Shadow Chancellor, Ed Balls claimed last week? That Labour didn’t spend more money than they had “available”. Hello? Ed “you spent £428 billion more than you had “available”.
A marvelous use of the inquisitive Hello?
But this year, three-quarters got five good GCSEs including English and maths. That’s way better than what the majority of the state schools in Sussex, Cambridgeshire, Hampshire got last year…
Yes, way more and way better. Perfect. Let’s look forward to an utterance of, “it’s well good, innit” in a future speech. But seriously, adapting his language for his audience is part of this speaker’s success.
It was clear that the Prime Minister enjoyed his speech. He sounded slightly throaty but still put in a good PR man’s performance. My favourite line?
This isn’t how a great nation was built. Britannia didn’t rule the waves with arm-bands on.
Reaching the conclusion to his speech, this line preached to the converted and got his audience ready for his final call to arms.
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The Principal Trainer at training business Time to Market. Based in Oxford, I run presentation and public speaking training courses, coaching sessions and seminars throughout the UK. Andrew Ivey on Google+
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